✍️ Tandem Services Coaching and Editing: Your Brain on Storytelling
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Craft: Brain Science and the Magic of StorytellingPart of what makes storytelling so magical is that the brain is a willing and active participant—in both fiction and nonfiction. When you tap into these techniques properly, your book becomes unputdownable. Your Brain on StoryOur brains are survival machines. Every second of every day, they’re scanning for information about how to survive and thrive. And here’s the kicker: they’re specifically wired to extract this information from stories. Think about it. How does every culture pass down vital wisdom? Stories. Aesop’s fables. Biblical parables. Fairy tales. These aren’t just entertainment—they’re survival manuals disguised as narratives. They teach us how to navigate society, avoid danger, and succeed in life, all wrapped in a format our brains can’t resist remembering. Here’s where it gets interesting: when you read a story, your brain automatically casts itself as the protagonist. Read about someone escaping a tiger? Your brain files that away under “potentially useful.” But tigers aren’t really the issue anymore, are they? The real landmines are emotional and social. That’s why romance, women’s fiction, and character-driven stories are so powerful—they’re teaching your brain how to navigate the truly dangerous territories of the heart, relationships, and community dynamics. These aren’t “fluff” genres. They’re survival guides for modern life. The Blueprint Your Brain CravesStories work because they follow a pattern your brain instinctively recognizes. As storytellers, understanding this pattern makes you incredibly powerful. Here’s what your brain is desperately searching for: A character with a wound—some past trauma that created a lie they believe about themselves. They’ve built their entire life around protecting this wound. Everything’s fine until… Bang. The inciting incident. Something happens that shatters their carefully constructed world. They can’t operate the old way anymore. They want something external (rescue the princess, win the case, find the killer), but what they really need is healing from that original wound. Being human, they’ll try everything to get what they want while still protecting their wound. But you, the author, won’t let them. You’ll throw conflict after conflict at them—because the brain knows easy victories are worthless. Each challenge forces them closer to confronting their wound, usually making things spectacularly worse. Until the black moment arrives. The wound is ripped wide open. The lie feels truer than ever. All is lost. But in this darkness, something shifts. They see what they couldn’t see before. The lie reveals itself as a lie. They do what they couldn’t do on page one. Maybe there’s one final battle to fight with their newfound strength, but the real victory has already happened. This is your satisfying conclusion. See It in ActionSound familiar? You can probably think of a lot of movies and books that follow this formula, but in case you can’t, I’ll give you an example. Take Star Wars. Luke’s wound? He believes he’ll never amount to anything, trapped in his father’s shadow and his parents’ unknown (to him) circumstances. He longs for adventure, for something more, but he’s never going to get it. The lie? He’s not capable of greatness. He’s not enough. He’s stuck on a moisture farm until a droid arrives with Princess Leia’s message. That’s his choice moment—the inciting incident. Ignore it and stay safe, or accept the invitation to adventure. The external goal becomes “rescue the princess.” That’s what starts him on this journey. But what he really needs, what will heal his wound, is to become part of something bigger than himself. Cue the complications: asteroid fields, Imperial capture, Obi-Wan’s death, space battles. Each one forces Luke to confront his wound. Until we get to the black moment: The Death Star is about to destroy the Rebel base. Nothing’s working. Luke faces his deepest fear—he really is worthless, unable to save anyone. Then Obi-Wan’s voice: “Use the Force, Luke.” In trusting something beyond himself, Luke shatters the lie. He destroys the Death Star, not through luck or technology, but through believing in his own capability. The pattern makes perfect sense when you see it applied to something you’re familiar with. The Non-Negotiable RulesEvery element in your story must exist for a reason. The brain assumes if you included it, it matters to the solution its looking for. Random details are betrayals. Everything must connect to the wound somehow. That’s the problem the brain is trying to solve. Anything else is noise. Everything must resolve logically. The brain needs to be able to replicate the solution in real life. Your TurnHow does your story stack up? Does your story hit these beats? Does your nonfiction book take readers on this journey through stories and case studies? Next time you’re watching a movie or reading a book—especially one you can’t put down—notice how the creators weaponize brain science to hook you. Then go do exactly that in your own work. Because once you understand what the brain is looking for, you can deliver it every single time. Next month, we’ll focus on how this looks with nonfiction. Where you can find meI’ll be teaching at the Author Learning Center this month on Everything Editing: What it is, how to do it, and how to hire it out. The first session is Thursday, October 30 and the second session is Wednesday, November 19. Both are at 10:30 PT and the content will be the same. You can register here. Tandem Services has a YouTube page! Check it out at YouTube.com/@TandemServices Want personalized writing advice? Share a writing, editing, or publishing hurdle you have faced or a question you have and I will email you an autographed copy of Eat the Elephant: How to Write (and Finish!) Your Book One Bite at a Time and send you a personalized five-minute video. Click here to find out more. This month’s resource recommendationsJon Acuff’s book Finish is my recommended resource for this month. If you’ve been around here awhile, you know I love his book Soundtracks for the repetitive (often not helpful) things we tell ourselves and how to harness the power of our thoughts. But his earlier book, Finish, is fantastic for authors because it address directly the issues of goal setting, making promises to yourself, and things authors who want to write and finish a book must deal with. In a fun aside, he now has a card deck of Soundtracks. I got two decks. They are super fun and thought provoking. You can get yours here. Kudos!Tracy del Campo won the prestigious ACFW Genesis award for her book that I had the pleasure of editing. It was a well-deserved honor, and I’m grateful to be a part of it. This is one of the largest contests for unpublished authors and the competition is fierce. Anthony Vartuli published his book, The Mysterious Encounters of Joseph Tropea. If you like CS Lewis’s The Great Divorce, this book will be right up your alley. If you’re one of my clients who has won an award, finaled in a contest, achieved bestseller status, has a new release, or hit some sales goals, let me know. I’d love to celebrate your wins with you! Writing quoteDon’t compare your beginning to someone else’s middle–Jon Acuff Pressing on! Jennifer PS—You should assume any link in this Update is an affiliate link. It costs you nothing more but gives me a few pennies. 🙂 |
